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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. (opinion) Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The technology leap in the past 20 years, lead to a revolution in the production industry.
This
 essay agrees that humans should work less because of
this
.
Firstly
, it will discuss the evolution of human beings and technology.
Secondly
, it will show the benefit of automation. Technology is a thing that takes us to the thing. Since we discovered fire and learnt how to reproduce it. That was the
first
 step toward automation. Controlling everything around us was
next
. Staring with cultivating animals and plants, build houses, constructing cities and streamline the process of food production,
this
 advancement asked for more and more.
Therefore
 the invention of computers was a must. It was the right step toward doing more with less. Now, the focus shifted to becoming creative, live a happy life and enjoy our time with family. Reducing the number of hours is important for a healthy and better life.
For instance
, in ,Sweden they reduced the number of hours to 30 hours per week.
Consequently
, It should reflect negatively on productivity but the opposite happened. They became more productive. With the right
processes
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 any workplace can achieve the same result with a combination of labour and machines. In fact, we shaped the modern world as it is so we can do less. In conclusion, given the above-stated information, it is a quite evident reduction of shift will lead us to a happy life. And we tend to become more creative when we not stressed.
Therefore
 we believe it is the right move toward the
next
 future.
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