Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, fast
food
is being eaten by most of
the Change preposition
apply
people
and researchers proved that it has detrimental
effect on their body. Few Add an article
a detrimental
people
argue that issue can be resolved by getting people
educated while others feel that providing education is not the only solution. Notwithstanding, I strongly advocate the same that educating people
will definitely decrease the consumption of junk food
but it will not eliminate the habit of eating out. This
essay will discuss about
both the solutions along with my opinion with relevant examples.
There are numerous reasons due to which an individual likes to consume Remove the preposition
apply
food
outside. Firstly
, in this
age of cut-throat competition, everyone is very busy throughout the day and has to work hard within the deadlines set to accomplish targets. Engaging
whole day in work, one has no time to cook and eat home Add an article
An engaging
The engaging
food
, so people
go for readymade food
. Secondly
, because outside food
is very cheap and quick, anyone can afford it even the underprivileged people
. For instance
, a survey showed that as compared to past
, almost 80% of Add an article
the past
people
love to eat outside because it is not costly and they can enjoy having it with their family and friends.
Nevertheless
, from past
some decades, it has Add an article
the past
also
been noticed that by consuming junk food
, people
are becoming sick and their health has been deteriorated
. Education is an important tool by which bad habits of eating unhealthy fast Change to the active voice
deteriorated
food
can be controlled to a great extent. To illustrate, people
should be educated about the diseases caused by fast
Add a hyphen
fast-food
food
eating and cost
of the treatment. Add an article
the cost
In addition
to this
measure, government
should impose high taxes on eatables as well as its distribution. Add an article
the government
Furthermore
, the advertisements that promotes
junk and unhealthy Change the verb form
promote
food
should be banned by the state.
In conclusion, although
fast food
is easily
accessible and low cost, it is harmful Add an article
an easily
for
our health and it can be controlled by education and governmental action to increase the prices and levy taxes on fast Change the preposition
to
food
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