You are going to visit New Zealand for an English and homestay program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family: Introduce yourself Ask the family some questions to get info that is imp to you Tell the family about your arrival date and time.

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Dear

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X, I am Jyoti Khera,

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postgraduate student and Indian by nationality. I applied for

English

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the English

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and homestay program which is being conducted by New

Zealand

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University and luckily, I got selected for the same. I have been told by my college that you are my host during my stay in New

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and I really want to thank you for allowing me to live in your house. I am coming there in the month of August and will be visiting New

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for the

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time. If you can tell me about the weather conditions during that time period it would be of great help as I would be able to pack my clothes

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, give me the details of the basic items which I need to carry along with me

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as the bedcover, utensils and toiletries. Is there anything special that you want me to get for you from India as a souvenir? Please feel free to tell me. I will be arriving at New

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airport on 15th August 2021 at 10.30 pm. If it is possible for you can you please pick me from the airport,

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otherwise

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I will book a taxi to reach your address. I look forward to spending quality time with you and your family during the length of

stay

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my stay

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. Yours sincerely, J

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