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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 of the rapid changes of today’s world is
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 of some local
languages
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. There is now a debate over whether or not we should embrace
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 change or worried about it. There are a group of people who believe fewer
languages
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 means easier communication. I completely disagree with
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 view as I think there would be several negative consequences along with it.
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 with, behind each
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 and linguistic rules lied a hidden treasure.
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, each
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 is
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representative of
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 unique
culture
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 of a nation. A lot of anecdotes, fables, and poets in each
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 is formed
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 of a historic event in that particular
culture
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 and with
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 dying out, a part of human history will be lost. A good example of
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 would be foreign countries invasions to another country in history which had led to complete diminishment of local
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 as the case with Egyptian invasion
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 Syria which ruined the unique communication style of Syrian people.
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 it might sound easier to have just
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 universal
language
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 and get yourself free from
language
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 barrier problems, there is
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 point missing here and
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the loss
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 of
language
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 diversity attraction for tourists.
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, imagine
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 day all people around the world speak in English, which is currently
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 of the most popular
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, no enthusiasm and curiosity would be left in
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 case for tourists to explore another country and
culture
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. In a nutshell, I firmly believe
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 of complete removal of a
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 from
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a course
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 of history will significantly outweigh its possible advantage. As much as communicating in a universal
language
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 may look exciting, but it would result in loss of
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culture
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 diversity and local literature attraction to
travelers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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