Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The past few decades have seen a phenomenal upsurge in cross-border travel. There is a heated debate about whether the development may give rise to locals' grudge against tourists. To a certain ,extent I believe the development nourishes mutual understanding of
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we cannot ignore some conflicts somehow appearing from distinct cultural backgrounds On the one hand, the main reason why international tourism is of great importance for citizens is that it helps them a lot of amazing opportunities to learn about different cultures
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as costumes, traditions belonging to Africa, Asia or Europe.
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, when Western
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travel to Asian
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, they learn about distinct cultural aspects from natives and are open to experiencing local customs and food which has developed a close bond between the eastern and western worlds.
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, not only international tourists invest in the development of the economic and financial sphere of the
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they visit, but
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visitors help to support local
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from unemployment - especially in small and poor
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, giving them the chance to survive.
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, some argue that the rise of global tourism is associated with conflict between visitors and local
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. Some
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are very close and private, their culture and traditions are very strict and strange for most of the tourists. Take Thailand
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, certain acts of disrespect for the King are likely to generate resentment from the local inhabitants or even worse, foreign visitors may be imprisoned.
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got tired of endless tourist streams flowing to their
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every year. In conclusion, I firmly believe that more emphasis should be placed on mutual understanding between cultures in transnational travel rather than the cause of tension. It is predicted that, in future, we should have more knowledge of different cultures before their arrival to avoid several unnecessary misunderstandings.
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