Many country encourage tourism. Does it bring advangtages or disadvantages

Tourism

has been one of the sectors that contributes to one's

country

economy for decades.,

Also

this

business is able to gain the

country

's popularity that's why many countries are encouraging

tourism

.

However

,it has been causing a lot of bad impact on the environment.So the purpose of

this

essay is to justify to the

tourism

business has both positive and negative sides.

To begin

with,many people love to travel because travelling brings people a feeling of joy and thrilling plus a chance to explore other

country

's culture.In order to raise the

country

's economy,the government allows

this

business to operate continuously.

In addition

,a

country

with many remarkable and breath-taking places are expected to gain more tourists compared to other countries.

As a result

,the

country

's reputation will get highly appraised for being prominent.

However

,what really capture the tourists the most is culture,take South Korea

for instance

they are not just only favoured by their food,movies,music but

also

their language just because their tones are fairly pleasant.

Therefore

,gathering a lot of

tourism

is convenient to link with the entertainment sector by introducing with foreigners. Even though, the government can earn a huge sum of money from that,

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the environment standard has been in a negative gradient since travellers arrived.To illustrate,there have been troubles about littering by tourist every year,

this

could bring down one's

country

images if the government are not planning to deal with it.Apart from

this

, tourists probably will ruin the historical places or the

country

's cultural heritage.In order to have a solution for these difficulties,there should be a monetary fine, in general, to warn people to have more watchful with their action. In conclusion,

tourism

has both disadvantages and advantages in extensive.

Nevertheless

,having a penalty for violating the rules can work out the troubles,by the

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way we can eliminate the disadvantage s for

this

touristry.