Many country encourage tourism. Does it bring advangtages or disadvantages

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has been one of the sectors that contributes to one's

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economy for decades.,

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business is able to gain the

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's popularity that's why many countries are encouraging

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,it has been causing a lot of bad impact on the environment.So the purpose of

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essay is to justify to the

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business has both positive and negative sides.

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with,many people love to travel because travelling brings people a feeling of joy and thrilling plus a chance to explore other

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's culture.In order to raise the

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's economy,the government allows

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business to operate continuously.

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,a

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with many remarkable and breath-taking places are expected to gain more tourists compared to other countries.

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's reputation will get highly appraised for being prominent.

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,what really capture the tourists the most is culture,take South Korea

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they are not just only favoured by their food,movies,music but

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their language just because their tones are fairly pleasant.

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,gathering a lot of

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is convenient to link with the entertainment sector by introducing with foreigners. Even though, the government can earn a huge sum of money from that,

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the environment standard has been in a negative gradient since travellers arrived.To illustrate,there have been troubles about littering by tourist every year,

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could bring down one's

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images if the government are not planning to deal with it.Apart from

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, tourists probably will ruin the historical places or the

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's cultural heritage.In order to have a solution for these difficulties,there should be a monetary fine, in general, to warn people to have more watchful with their action. In conclusion,

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has both disadvantages and advantages in extensive.

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,having a penalty for violating the rules can work out the troubles,by the

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way we can eliminate the disadvantage s for

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