Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree?

Modernization provides adverse opportunities to

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life.In recent years it is a belief among people

is

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that we have plenty of varieties to choose from.I agree with the fact since no particular field is mentioned and

generally

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we have a considerable amount of

choices

.I will discuss the

choices

and their benefits in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.

Firstly

,talking about education

student

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can have enough

domain

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to pursue as a career compared to ancient days

such

as language,science,history and many more.

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it widens career

choices

.For ,example a computer graduate can be a lecturer,software engineer,hardware engineer and even can be a sportsperson or YouTuber.Based on the interest of a student one can opt

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adverse options.

Therefore

I believe globalization opens up several doors

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people

On the other hand

,young adults are

so much

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fond of fashion

as well as

variety in life.Looking at the brand

as well as

a colour choice I don't believe that we can count them.

In

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citizen

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citizens

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from India can have the choice to choose a European costume,

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broadens

fashion

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their fashion

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sense.In other ,words media plays a significant role.

This

fact influences our leisure time

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also

.To illustrate media has animation,action,thriller,horror,inspirational,

futuristic

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and futuristic

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movies In conclusion, starting from education,career,

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and entertainment

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to fashion we have numerous

choices

.So I strongly believe people nowadays

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many options to choose from.