Comparative study on accuracy of mucosal estradiol-17β, testosterone and 11-ketotestosterone, for maturity, and cutaneous vitellogenin gene expression in goldfish (Carassius auratus)

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identification and

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status of fish, for managing broodstock, utilization of accurate procedure is required. The skin mucosal layer shows not only the presence of some reproduction outputs but can

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meet robust non-invasive tool requirements. Skin

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estradiol-17β (E2), testosterone (T), 11-ketotestosterone (11-KT), vitellogenin (

VTG

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) and calcium (Ca) levels in goldfish, seasonal asynchronous spawner teleost, were traced in both sexes.

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, histological analyses were monitored throughout females'

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stages (primary-growth, cortical-alveoli, initial and late-vitellogenesis) and males' spermatogenesis and spermiation. Surface mucosal values,

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, were compared to the plasma and gonad tissues. The concentrations of mucosal E2, T and 11-KT had been significantly surging during initial and late-vitellogenesis, spermatogenesis and spermiation, respectively. Plasma

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steroids showed the same results.

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, E2 concentration revealed a peak only in late-vitellogenesis.

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VTG

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levels showed significant alterations according to females’

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status. Ca drew a similar trend as

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, its accuracy for

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identification was higher than

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. The highest expression level of

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was observed in ovaries, while its expression in the liver and skin followed rather similar patterns. Our results suggested that

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androgens (89% accuracy) could be introduced as a robust indicator to identify goldfish

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status.

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study expected that 11-KT will become more reliable along with

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and Ca for

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verification than E2 and T.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

224 words

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Comparative study on accuracy of mucosal estradiol-17β, testosterone and 11-ketotestosterone, for maturity, and cutaneous vitellogenin gene expression in goldfish (Carassius auratus)

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Some people believe that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extent do you agree?

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.