News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do you think that there is too much emphasis on bad news these days?

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between weather a piece of
news
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should
be
a TV stories
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a TV story
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or an article in a newspaper.
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discuss
firstly
, the decisions process and the
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format.
Secondly
, Is bad
news
are focused on these days. Each
news
is a story on its own, the
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citizen
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almost half of their time
the
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watching
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show.
However
, the main
citeria
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criteria
in the publishing on TV if there is a demand for it or not which will create
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revenue in return. As the target audience in the USA
are
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families watching
news
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the news
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togther
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together
.
For example
, a water park opening,
family
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will want to watch it. Another example would be a mass shooting inside a city hall, people will want to see
this
. Despite it is not a
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event and it contains a lot of visual. On that note, the TV
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glamorous
was built on top of Ads revenue models. Ads and the reach of a
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story
are
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factor
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in
brodcasting
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broadcasting
it. Bad
news
seems to satisfy the need for people to know what is happening so that can worry less. So
news
agency and channels provide what their audience looking for. The breaking
news
is all about
catastrophic
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event. It
depened
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depends
depended
depend
on how big the situation is they might
intrupt
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interrupt
a movie if it is big.
For example
, 9-11 tragedy was
a very important
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very important news
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news
that the whole world left what
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ever
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they are doing and was watching. In conclusion, catastrophic
news
is published for people who are seeking to feel safe.
In addition
to
this
is to
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boost
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the ads revenue. Which
also
the main deciding element for the publishing
mediem
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medium
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