"The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

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day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether citizens should be highly encouraged to use public transportation rather than private cars in order to alleviate congestion and

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contamination. In my opinion, I totally agree with

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solution because of some below reasonable explanations.

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with, it can be considered as an effective measure to deal with

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jams when people commute by means of public

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of private vehicles. Indeed, the

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infrastructure in some countries cannot meet the citizen’s demand as the roads are too narrow, compared with a huge number of cars in use on a daily basis.

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, public

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as buses and subways can solve the gridlocks as many people can travel

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a long distance at the same time.

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can be exemplified by the prime case of Japan, where inhabitants mainly commute to work by subway, which can partly mitigate

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jams during rush hour.

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, it is undeniable that encouraging urban dwellers to utilize

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public transportation can make substantial contributions to addressing the issue of polluted

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. To be more specific, if each individual uses one car, it is estimated that about 136 grams of carbon dioxide per

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discharged.

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, with the use of public

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as buses and subways, a number of carbon emissions could be reduced considerably, with 950 grams over 50 people per

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, according to some statistics in 2016.

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, using more public

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can be a simple and feasible solution to tackle

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pollution in big cities. In conclusion, I strongly believe that people’s awareness of using public

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instead

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of private vehicles should be raised so as to solve

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snarls and

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degradation,

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the quality of life could be improved

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