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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people say that it is too late to do something while others think that actions can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion

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Forest and
animals
 play a vital role in the life of every individual because vegetation provide
us
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 oxygen and creatures make the balance of
food
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 cycle.
However
,a handful of masses opine that human activity has had a bad influence on flora and
animals
 that cannot
be
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change
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changed
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.In my opinion,it can
be
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 if the government should take any action against these activities.
To begin
 with,deforestation is the
first
 factors that harmful impact on plants and
animals
 because
population
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the population
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 is emerging day by day
Although
,the need
of
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for
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 land is more so that’s why individuals are cutting down
forest
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 for their livelihood.
Secondly
, there are many Masses those who are doing hunting of wild
animals
 For the enjoyment as well as for the source of food.
Moreover
, the skin of
animals
 is used for
the
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medicine and clothes.
For instance
,one writer wrote in his survey that
in
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all over the world 10,000 creatures were killed for
medicine
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 purposes and for the entertainment of individuals.
On the other hand
, there are ample
of
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way to stop deforestation like every person take
oath
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an oath
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 that they would plant one tree every month which will
helpful
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 to observe the
green house
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greenhouse
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 gases which are enhancing due to global warming.
Furthermore
, the government should ban
on
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hunting and allow
the
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pharmaceutical companies to use only dead
animals
 rather than living creatures. To conclude, the government should impose
higher
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 fine and punishment on hunting as well as on cutting
of
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plants.
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