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The consumption of the world’s resources is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

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Natural
resources
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 are too essential for human being as without them no
one
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 can exist. It has been observed in recent years that people are using the same negligently and
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 in a larger proportion.
This
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 essay will highlight both reasons for consuming the high quantity of
resources
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 and measures to control it. There are numerous causes of using oil, coal, fossil fuel, water, air the natural
resources
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.
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, with the massive increased in population over the globe, these
resources
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 are being consumed in a bigger amount to satisfying the needs of everyone.
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, in Vietnam, it has been seen that in
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 some years the use of oil, gas and water has been increasing at a very fast rate due to the rapid increase in population.
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, population growth results in industrialisation, the big business and factories consume the natural
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 to be successful in a competitive market.
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, it is high time to control the usage of
resources
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 that are gifted by the earth. By providing relevant education to people and make them aware
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 the fact that
resources
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 are very crucial that no
one
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 can live without them so
one
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 should use the same very carefully. To illustrate, we use oil, gas and water for our survival while the other coal and fuel are used to make our life comfortable.
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, the government should levy high taxes on the consumption of
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 for industries.
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, other alternatives can be used
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 as solar energy. In conclusion, natural
resources
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 should be used for necessity only and with proper care as they are very limited and once they will be finished, no
one
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 on
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 planet will able to exist.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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