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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy,with everything organised and in it's place.what is your opinion about this?

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Some individuals hold
this
 perception that it is vital that our surrounding should be very clean and well planned at work and house so that makes it easy for us to remember where
things
 are when we need them.I totally agree with the above notion.It has many advantages if we put
equipment
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 where they belong.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and foremost benefit is it looks beautiful and
it
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spread positive vibes around us.
For example
,if you are a businessman and your office is messy when a client will come to you to see you when they will see a filthy environment around you that will leave a negative impact on them.Probably you will miss that deal or they would not come back to you.,
Moreover
 our nearby objects show our personality to others.People who have organised well around them we think they are more intelligent and punctual we trust them more as
compare
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 to unorganised personalities.
In addition
,it
also
 helps us in our daily home chores.If we put
things
 where they should be.When we need them we can find out quickly and save our
time
.Apart from ,
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this
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 there is very less chance we lost our devices.To illustrate some
time
 when we through
things
 everywhere when we need them and we could not find them that gives stress us and many
time
 we lost expensive gadgets.,
Additionally
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 when our surrounding is clean and tidy it
also
 keeps us healthy and fit.Folk in
the
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 dirty environment get many bad diseases. In conclusion,some
time
 small
things
 make a big difference in our life.I think
this
 is one of them if we adopt a habit of put equipment in the right place and keep our house and office clean and tidy it work as a stress buster and we can live a happy and healthy life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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