In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without CV paying.

Recently, there has been
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widespread concern about what will happen to printed
books
in the nearest future as some claimed that all raw publications will go into extinction and
information
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for free. I strongly agree with
this
viewpoint .
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system all over the world and the easy reaching of
information
online. To start with, perhaps the foremost reason why newsprints on paper will be obsolete is because of the progress in technology across the globe.
This
implies that there are available e-
books
o. Computers
also
on our smartphones that
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easy
access
to them promptly.
For example
, a recent study reveals that a significant proportion of people adopted
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the use of mobile phones to check
news
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online while the purchase
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newsletters on paper
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declined.
In addition
to
this
, some claimed that
books
are
cubersome
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cumbersome
and sometimes not everybody can be financially
bouyant
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buoyant
to purchase magazines .
For instance
, some studies show that nowadays students prefer to check for
books
on the internet for free rather than buying from
books
stores.
Therefore
, it can be seen clearly that purchasing of printouts news articles will be declining as time go on and more people will prefer to
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online for free.
However
, opponents of
this
viewpoint allude that printout copied of data can not be extincted because news or notebooks from the web might not be form
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source.
Likewise
, they
also
affirm that
books
are edited and verified by researchers before publications.
Nevertheless
, Research has proven
otherwise
that online
informations
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were
also
scrutinized and checked by editors before being published. In conclusion,
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for free rather than purchasing
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printout
books
or newsletters. It seems logical to assert that the advance in technology and easy
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for
information
will be preferable.
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