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It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion

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Part of the population believes that having a
lot
 of
money
 is the most important factor to achieve a happy
life
.
This
 essay will discuss not only how
money
 can make
people
 happy but
also
 what other things might be responsible for making
people
 happy.
To begin
 with, it is important to say that
money
 is a currency that allows
people
 to increase their standards of living and diminish the necessity of working to maintain their cost of living.
Therefore
, having a
lot
 of
money
 allows
people
use
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 their time to do what makes them truly happy.
For example
, I studied with an extremely rich youngster that had been living in five different countries over the past 3 years.
Furthermore
,
people
 who have lots of
money
 can pay for extraordinary experiences or services
such
 as international travellings, luxury cars or expensive accessories.
Nevertheless
, it is
also
 true that
although
money
 is important to live in a comfortable environment and enjoy some outstanding experiences in
life
, there are other ways to find
happiness
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 that have nothing to do with
money
. Developing strong connections with friends and taking care of
people
 you love can be as much effective as having a
lot
 of
money
 to find happiness in
life
. Some research conducted by psychologists in Brazil showed that despite most
of
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Brazilians
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brazilians
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the brazilians
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 were living with less than a hundred dollars per month, they tend to feel happy and optimistic about
life
. The reason for
this
 phenomenon is because the culture in Brazil stimulates
people
 to spend a
lot
 of time with family and friends. To summarize, having a
lot
 of
money
 not only can make
people
 have time and resources to enjoy more
life
 pleasures but
also
 allows
people
 to live extraordinary experiences.
This
 definitely can increase the happiness of a person.
Nonetheless
, other factors
such
 as developing
strong
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 connection with friends or having someone to take care
and
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 love might
also
 be responsible for making
people
 happy with their lives and optimistic about the future.
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