Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspaper or watching TV

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Nowadays, due to
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the mobile
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revolution
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people
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find
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to read the
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through
internet
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instead
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of watching television
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channels
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or reading through newspapers. They
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feel it is convenient to read the
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while travelling which saves their time in leaps and bounds. In the following passage, I will explain the causes
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change and conclude whether it is a positive or negative sign. Do
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find time watching the
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on television? No. Most of them are engaged with hectic work schedule, in
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circumstances they cannot afford to see the
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in
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place for hours.
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,
people
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feel adequate advertisements create
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for the
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. Over the years,
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channels
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to increase their
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base
they
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apply
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manipulate
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news
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the news
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to make it more interesting.
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, the death of
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Jambalaya is creating lots of political conspiracy, most of the
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channels
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have their own versions to make it more interesting, to spike their
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.
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,
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too much commercialization and false information are frustrating
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to watch the
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channels
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.
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, many newspapers have increased their price frequently.
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, they contain enormous commercial pages which enable
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to think to buy or not.
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, the Hindu
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news prints
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newsprints
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increased their Sunday edition to 12, where many youngsters are hesitant to buy.
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, easy internet access helps
people
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to read
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through mobile applications instantly at
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price.
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, it is believed, regular price revision and internet revolution are the major cause for
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change. To sum up, as the proverb says, “time is gold”.
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feel it is not worth to watch or read
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through television and
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news prints
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newsprints
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, which is easily available on mobile
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applications. But
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trend is not good for the country, which affects youngsters reading skill drastically,
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their language skill will be spoiled by
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transformation and
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considered to be a negative development.
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