Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspaper or watching TV
Nowadays, due to
mobile
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the mobile
revolution
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,revolution
people
find easy
to read the Add a pronoun
it easy
news
through internet
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the internet
instead
of watching television news
channels
or reading through newspapers. They also
feel it is convenient to read the news
while travelling which saves their time in leaps and bounds. In the following passage, I will explain the causes for
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of
this
change and conclude whether it is a positive or negative sign.
Do people
find time watching the news
on television? No. Most of them are engaged with hectic work schedule, in such
circumstances they cannot afford to see the news
in same
place for hours. Change the article
the same
Moreover
, people
feel adequate advertisements create nuisance
for the Add an article
a nuisance
viewers
. Over the years, news
channels
to increase their viewers
base they
manipulate Correct pronoun usage
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news
to make it more interesting. Add an article
the news
For instance
, the death of Ms.
Jambalaya is creating lots of political conspiracy, most of the Change the punctuation
Ms
news
channels
have their own versions to make it more interesting, to spike their viewers
. Therefore
, the
too much commercialization and false information are frustrating Correct article usage
apply
viewers
to watch the news
channels
.
Furthermore
, many newspapers have increased their price frequently. In addition
, they contain enormous commercial pages which enable people
to think to buy or not. For example
, the Hindu news prints
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newsprints
has
increased their Sunday edition to 12, where many youngsters are hesitant to buy. Change the verb form
have
Additionally
, easy internet access helps people
to read news
through mobile applications instantly at low
price. Add an article
a low
Thus
, it is believed, regular price revision and internet revolution are the major cause for this
change.
To sum up, as the proverb says, “time is gold”. People
feel it is not worth to watch or read news
through television and news prints
, which is easily available on mobile Correct your spelling
newsprints
news
applications. But this
trend is not good for the country, which affects youngsters reading skill drastically, also
their language skill will be spoiled by such
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a huge
this
considered to be a negative development.Submitted by madhuranijadhav on
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