Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others Disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many interviewers ask individuals for
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private knowledge which includes their free time leisure activities, interests and their marital status. Many
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assumes that it is appropriate and valuable to ask these
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while
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says it is unnecessary. In my opinion, it is totally fine to ask
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question
for more information about the person the firm is going to hire. In
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essay, we will discuss both views in detail and give my opinion.
First
of all, asking
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from
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is useful sometimes. As there are many companies who ask their employees while in
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interviews
about their
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favourite
things to do in their
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leisure
time.
Secondly
, from my
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the main point to ask these
questions
is to know better about the person
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they are hiring and according to
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they can decide how much wages have to
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.
For instance
, the
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interviews
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with the CV, education and experience and after the interview mostly
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ask general
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so they can know about the mentality of the individual.
Moreover
, asking
questions
about marital status are usually have ask
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because of the wages that fix on the basis.
On the other hand
, most of the employees find it irrelevant because they assume that in professionalism personal
question
should not be asked, as they want to keep their private
life
separate from professional
life
and it is not a big deal.
In Addition
, many
wokers
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workers
do not want to disclose their
life
and
activites
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activities
as many
emloyees
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employees
are usually in
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whether to
answer
the
question
or not.
For example
, many workers in their interviews
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answer
the
question
which is related to the
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life
and if examiner ask
questions
about hobbies and interests they simply deny to
answer
them and mostly
this
is the reason why they lose jobs. In conclusion, In my
opinion
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I think there are a plethora
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in which they ask
questions
and it is appropriate for the employees as the examiner want to more about you and your interests and according to the criteria they can give you the salary.
However
, it is not
convinient
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convenient
for every person to
answer
these
questions
as they are not essential in interviews.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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