Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others Disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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private knowledge which includes their free time leisure activities, interests and their marital status. Many

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says it is unnecessary. In my opinion, it is totally fine to ask

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for more information about the person the firm is going to hire. In

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is useful sometimes. As there are many companies who ask their employees while in

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the main point to ask these

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is to know better about the person

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they are hiring and according to

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they can decide how much wages have to

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so they can know about the mentality of the individual.

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because of the wages that fix on the basis.

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, most of the employees find it irrelevant because they assume that in professionalism personal

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separate from professional

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and it is not a big deal.

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about hobbies and interests they simply deny to

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is the reason why they lose jobs. In conclusion, In my

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and it is appropriate for the employees as the examiner want to more about you and your interests and according to the criteria they can give you the salary.

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these

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as they are not essential in interviews.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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373 words

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job application
personal information
hobbies and interests
marital status
relevant
useful
privacy
assessing candidates
qualifications
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