It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that in order to be successful in life, a person should be born with certain talents ,meanwhile, others believe that a child can be taught to excel in certain
skills
such
as sports , music. However
, in my opinion , some amount
of talent is certainly needed.
On the one hand , most of the population think that some children are born with certain skills
which are not taught to them but they already have them. For example
, some singers such
as Lata Mangeshkar possess a beautiful voice ,due to which, any song they sing suits well on them. For instance
, some students score well in exams even if they study only for two hours on daily basis but, on the other hand
, some of them spend a lot of time in studies ,due to this
fact, they do not achieve a higher grade. The main reason behind this
is that some of them possess very high processing and memory power, due to which ,they perform well in exams.
On the other hand
, most of the public believe that a child can excel in any field if he is trained well in that particular area. For instance
, children can perform well in football if they are being provided with a certain amount
of specialized training. To illustrate, a child can score good marks in all the subjects , if his parents provide a good tutor.
To conclude , in my opinion , it is necessary to have a certain amount
of talent because even if a person is provided with a
specialized training , there are Remove the article
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a certain
amount
of skills
due to which he can perform well than others and that skills
cannot be taught , they are already inbuilt.Submitted by manasiparmar97 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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