It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometime claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that in order to be successful in life, a person should be born with certain talents ,meanwhile, others believe that a child can be taught to excel in certain
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as sports , music.
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, in my opinion , some
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of talent is certainly needed. On the one hand , most of the population think that some children are born with certain
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which are not taught to them but they already have them.
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, some singers
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as Lata Mangeshkar possess a beautiful voice ,due to which, any song they sing suits well on them.
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, some students score well in exams even if they study only for two hours on daily basis but,
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, some of them spend a lot of time in studies ,due to
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fact, they do not achieve a higher grade. The main reason behind
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is that some of them possess very high processing and memory power, due to which ,they perform well in exams.
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, most of the public believe that a child can excel in any field if he is trained well in that particular area.
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, children can perform well in football if they are being provided with a certain
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of specialized training. To illustrate, a child can score good marks in all the subjects , if his parents provide a good tutor. To conclude , in my opinion , it is necessary to have a certain
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of talent because even if a person is provided with
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specialized training , there are
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of
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due to which he can perform well than others and that
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cannot be taught , they are already inbuilt.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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