Some people think that a person can be known from his clothes. Do you agree or disagree.

Some
people
consider attire as
a
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an
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indicator of
personalities
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the personalities
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of
people
. I strongly agree with
this
notion because clothes are the
first
thing noticed and these
represnt
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represent
the style liked by a person which is a key to understand the nature of
people
.
Firstly
, whenever
people
meet each other the very
first
thing that they notice is clothes.
Clothese
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Clothes
Close
are the things seen by eyes rest features of personality is not visible.
People
understand each other with the way of dressing only.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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