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What are the benefits of living in big cities,as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas, and how can they be solved?

#cities #areas
It irrefutable that,evolution is the key to a healthy life for everyone. A certain segment of society believes that family prefer to the big state rather than rural nation .all
people
 need to basic requirements like medical system, public transportation
facilities
 , a job with higher salaries,electricity and I feel that there are more benefits of living big democracy.
To begin
 with, there are many benefits of living in big cities like medical is available with all
facilities
 which are required in case of emergency to save a person living the opposite side rural
areas
 have very few medical
facilities
 and may not save a person's life in critical situations.
this
 result is more attraction of
people
. Nation for living
in addition
 the amount of taxes collected by the government has a higher rate than rulers
areas
 . There before some big cities get more fund for development for public transportation . Electricity school and college . They are rural area's have very few
facilities
 and lacks behind in development because of uncompleted planning by the local authority.
However
 I feel that these problems can be resolved same
people
 in developing rural
areas
 government should private organizations for funding to improve
facilities
 in rural life transport, education
furthermore
 , medical
facilities
 not good which can help in improvement in
areas
 like both
this
. To conclude , I recommend special focus can the problem of area's by the government to resolve the problem of rural
areas
 .
people
 are living in there
areas
 and
people
 should suggestion development for rural area's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Amenities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Healthcare services
  • Educational institutions
  • Public transport
  • Social interactions
  • Quality of life
  • Specialized skills
  • Diverse industries
  • Medical care
  • Concentration
  • Infrastructure
  • Government investment
  • Internet connectivity
  • Local businesses
  • Community building
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