you recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. write a letter to the company to explain what you ordered and what is missing, explain the importance of missing item, ask for replacement item.

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Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing in connection with my recent purchase from your online store www.shoppersstop.com.

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order

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was delivered ahead of the estimated delivery date, I found out unsatisfactory that my

order

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was incomplete. I had placed an

order

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for two pairs of Nike women shoes and one pair of Nike men’s shoes in size 40, which was supposed to be a gift to my husband, under

the

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order

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no 123456 and is missing from the delivery. The reason mentioned in the note is that they do not have the requested size

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. My husband’s birthday is in 5 days time from now. I had, indeed, ordered these shoes because he very much likes the brand.

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delivery is extremely important because I do not have enough time to buy another present for him.

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he will be extremely upset

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if I do not gift him anything on his special day. Since it is a mistake on your side, I would like to have a replacement for the mentioned item. You can send me Men’s white Addidas sneakers in size 40,

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. Please make sure the

order

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gets delivered before 10th

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. I would be most grateful if you could give your immediate attention to

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matter so that

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issue gets resolved

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everyone’s convenience. Yours Faithfully Nikita Chauhan

Submitted by nikita04chauhan on Mon Feb 22 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

223 words

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. SWhat are its causes, and what sollutions can be offered?

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In some countries, the number of shooting massacres is on the rise because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.