You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter: - say how you came to know about him/her - explain why you want to learn this language - ask what help he/she can offer

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter with regard to get some information about learning french language from you.

To begin

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with, I have been searching for an appropriate tutor for me ,who can teach me

french

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French

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. Luckily,

last

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week I met one of my friends and he told me about your classes.

Moreover

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, he mentioned that you are living quite close to my home and he became a very confident and master in

french

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French

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Thus

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, I have decided to join your personal classes.

Moreover

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, I am an international student in Canada and in the next three months I will be done with my studies and as you know

this

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nation has two primary languages,

therefore

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I want to gain knowledge about

french

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French

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Furthermore

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This

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language can help me to get more employment opportunities

as well as

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apply

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enhance my CRS points,which can help me to get early citizenship in Canada.

Lastly

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, I already got some basic information from my friend,but I would like to hear from you about the fees,the timing of classes and how can I enrol in your batch. Please contact me with the additional details,so I can join your batch as soon as possible. yours Sincerely, Parth Parmar

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Consider breaking down some of the longer sentences to improve readability and ensure clarity.

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Pay attention to small grammatical and punctuation errors to enhance the overall quality of your writing.

task achievement

You addressed all parts of the prompt clearly and provided detailed reasons for wanting to learn French.

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The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, appropriate for a formal request.

coherence cohesion

Your letter follows a logical structure with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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