You want to learn a language. A teacher who teaches this language lives near the area where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter: - say how you came to know about him/her - explain why you want to learn this language - ask what help he/she can offer

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with regard to get some information about learning french language from you.
To begin
with, I have been searching for an appropriate tutor for me ,who can teach me
french
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French
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. Luckily,
last
week I met one of my friends and he told me about your classes.
Moreover
, he mentioned that you are living quite close to my home and he became a very confident and master in
french
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French
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.
Thus
, I have decided to join your personal classes.
Moreover
, I am an international student in Canada and in the next three months I will be done with my studies and as you know
this
nation has two primary languages,
therefore
I want to gain knowledge about
french
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French
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.
Furthermore
,
This
language can help me to get more employment opportunities
as well as
it
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apply
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enhance my CRS points,which can help me to get early citizenship in Canada.
Lastly
, I already got some basic information from my friend,but I would like to hear from you about the fees,the timing of classes and how can I enrol in your batch. Please contact me with the additional details,so I can join your batch as soon as possible. yours Sincerely, Parth Parmar
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down some of the longer sentences to improve readability and ensure clarity.
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Pay attention to small grammatical and punctuation errors to enhance the overall quality of your writing.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the prompt clearly and provided detailed reasons for wanting to learn French.
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The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, appropriate for a formal request.
coherence cohesion
Your letter follows a logical structure with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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