Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

world, the presence of

competition

is constantly on the rise.

Moreover

, many believe it should be more encouraged among

the

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children.

However

, there is a belief that

instead

of

competition

the kids should be stimulated with the concept of

co-operation

. I support the latter part of the argument,

however

, I will through some light on

both

statements.

To begin

with, toddlers who are encouraged to be more competitive might become more confident in themselves but might grow into envious and jealous people.

For instance

, they might not be able to endure defeat on

both

a professional and personal level.

Therefore

, the

competition

should be promoted as it positively affects the results in the fields of sports science, but it should be moderated.

On the other hand

,

co-operation

is becoming more important in everyday life.

Therefore

, throughout various activities, kids are being slowly introduced and encouraged to co-operate with each other.

This

leads to a sense of belonging in a community and making friends, a skill that will make them happier and more useful adults.

Therefore

,

co-operation

should be encouraged through

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educational programs, but even more by the parents. To conclude,

both

concepts have their merits and

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comes in terms of creating a personality, mindset, and adulthood in general. Albeit the sense of

competition

has a great contribution in the field of sports, it might not have the best outcome in the everyday life where the capability of efficient

co-operation

shows in everyday situations.

However

, it appears to be me that

both

should be encouraged but moderated.