Some people think that a person can be known from his clothes. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays the fashion industry is experiencing a boom because of the never-ending demand of
people
for new
clothes
. All around the world Clothing, which consumes a major part of ones earning, is considered of topmost priority because they believe
clothes
express who a person is. I strongly disagree with
this
belief that
clothes
identify a person.
To begin
with, presentability has always been popular among humans for ages because it reflects the
first
impression of
someone
, even before they start speaking. The reason being, well-dressed
people
are always appealing even though they might not be as they seem.
For instance
, In a gathering or a
party
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the most well-dressed person catches our attention.
Therefore
, one's attire plays a vital role in developing an opinion about them.
In contrast
, It is extremely unfair to judge
someone
based on their appearance. The dressing can not be a strong basis to build up an opinion about
someone
. It would be more reasonable to judge
someone
on basis of their knowledge.
Moreover
,
people
have different priorities. Studies indicate that a majority of rich
people
like Ratan Tata prefers wearing simple
clothes
. Rather than spending money on trying to look smart. It is far more intelligent to actually be smart. In conclusion, It is thoughtful to look good and wear good
clothes
.
Similarly
, it is extremely important to not judge
people
based on their appearance. In my opinion,
people
often are not the same as they appear.
Hence
, what is inside matters more than what appears on the outside.

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