Children should be allowed to choose subjects to learn at school. Do you agree with this statement?
There is no consensus in society
who
should choose Change preposition
on who
subjects
for pupils
. But the majority of the pedagogues and scientists think that should be children
. I agree with this
statement. Because in my opinion it is very important to know what subjects
children
would like to study and they must be allowed to choose classes
to attend. So I will try to prove you
that with examples of Finland Change preposition
to you
school
education and professor Jan Danilov's research.
The reason why children
should be allowed to choose school
lessons is that they can take a vector of their professional and intellectual development. For example
, pupils
in Finland take classes
for myself
and statistically they are more successful than Change the pronoun
me
children
from other countries. In the same way
Finland education system is one of the best education Add a comma
,way
system
in the world and Change to a plural noun
systems
that is
the reason why Finnish people often are professionals in their job. So allow children
to choose school
subjects
is a good idea because as a
result
they become good specialists.
The Add a comma
,result
second
example why
Change preposition
of why
pupils
should choose classes
for themselves is the
Jan Danilov's research from Poland National University. In 1998 Correct article usage
apply
professor
proved that Correct article usage
the professor
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children
childrens
who studying Correct your spelling
children
subjects
chosen by themselves are better on
70% than Change preposition
at
pupils
who learning a standart
Correct your spelling
standard
school
programm
. So Correct your spelling
programme
program
that is
why enabling children
to choose lessons to learn at school
is very important.
In conclusion
I agree with Add a comma
,conclusion
this
statement and in my opinion
it is necessary to allow Add a comma
,opinion
pupils
to choose classes
to attend.Submitted by Alina
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite