Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Robots
are likely to become as ubiquitous as the smartphone computers we all carry in our
future
society
. While some
people
argue that
robots
might have negative impacts on
the
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future
society
, personally I believe that the benefits of the robot are likely to outweigh the negative aspects of it. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that
robots
might have adverse effects on
society
in the
future
.
Firstly
, some
people
believe that
robots
will have a negative impact on the human workforce. The
people
will be replaced by machines and
this
will increase the unemployment rate.
As a result
, many other problems may emerge
such
as poverty and increased crimes.
Secondly
,
people
will become more dependent on
robots
in their daily life and
this
may harmfully affect their skills
as
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cooking and driving. So
people
become less active and
this
may result in some health problems like obesity.
On the other hand
, I would agree with those who argue that
robots
will play important positive roles in
future
society
. The
first
role is that
robots
could operate in locations that humans cannot reach
such
as exploration of
the
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outer space. They can act as extended eyes for humans enabling them to look beyond their visual boundaries.
Moreover
,
robots
will be used inside
the
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human bodies for monitoring their health and undertake surgery. The
second
role that will be played by
robots
is the helping of elderly and retired
people
with their daily life activities like cooking and cleaning.
Finally
,
robots
could do normal jobs quickly unlike human beings.
Robots
don not complain or get distracted or tired. They readily work twenty-four hours and require minimal maintenance. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for
in
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and against the role of
robots
in our
future
would, but I believe that
the
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robots
will add many benefits to the
future
society
.
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