Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Robots

are likely to become as ubiquitous as the smartphone computers we all carry in our

future

society

. While some

people

argue that

robots

might have negative impacts on

the

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future

society

, personally I believe that the benefits of the robot are likely to outweigh the negative aspects of it. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that

robots

might have adverse effects on

society

in the

future

.

Firstly

, some

people

believe that

robots

will have a negative impact on the human workforce. The

people

will be replaced by machines and

this

will increase the unemployment rate.

As a result

, many other problems may emerge

such

as poverty and increased crimes.

Secondly

,

people

will become more dependent on

robots

in their daily life and

this

may harmfully affect their skills

as

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cooking and driving. So

people

become less active and

this

may result in some health problems like obesity.

On the other hand

, I would agree with those who argue that

robots

will play important positive roles in

future

society

. The

first

role is that

robots

could operate in locations that humans cannot reach

such

as exploration of

the

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outer space. They can act as extended eyes for humans enabling them to look beyond their visual boundaries.

Moreover

,

robots

will be used inside

the

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human bodies for monitoring their health and undertake surgery. The

second

role that will be played by

robots

is the helping of elderly and retired

people

with their daily life activities like cooking and cleaning.

Finally

,

robots

could do normal jobs quickly unlike human beings.

Robots

don not complain or get distracted or tired. They readily work twenty-four hours and require minimal maintenance. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for

in

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and against the role of

robots

in our

future

would, but I believe that

the

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robots

will add many benefits to the

future

society

.