More and more people are opting for and consuming ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice has more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss

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It is generally believed that ready-to-eat

food

is becoming popular as compared to homemade

food

. In my opinion, I consider that the benefits of packaged

foods

outweigh the shortcoming of consuming them. Despite the minimal drawbacks below,I believe the benefits of having packaged

foods

are far more than the advantages.

Firstly

, ready-made

food

is easily available. Those who are working and do not get time to cook can easily have their

food

which can be cooked in no time.

For instance

, vegetable oats,upma,idli etcetera.

Secondly

, it is

also

useful for those who do not possess cooking skills because ready-to-eat

food

is quite easy to make by adding just water.

Thirdly

, a person can relish a variety of cuisines as many companies are making

such

foods

and that too in different varieties

such

as North Indian, South Indian, Gujarati and other famous eateries. Admittedly, there are some obstacles as well.One is that packed

foods

are less nutritious as compared to homemade

food

because preservatives are added to make them unperishable.

However

, the AGRO or ISI marked companies do take care of nutritional value. Another reason is, these

foods

are costlier than seasonal fruits and vegetables as they are transported from different states so the cost is added.

Although

this

is not the reason to worry about who are earning well. To conclude, the benefits of packed

foods

are far more than the drawbacks of it as these are suitable for working people because it is easy to get.

Moreover

, without the skills of cooking, people can enjoy different

foods

from different states.

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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