Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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world, the presence of

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is constantly on the rise.

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, many believe it should be more encouraged among

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children.

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, there is a belief that

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of

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the kids should be stimulated with the concept of

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. I support the latter part of the argument,

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, I will through some light on

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statements.

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with, toddlers who are encouraged to be more competitive might become more confident in themselves but might grow into envious and jealous people.

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, they might not be able to endure defeat on

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a professional and personal level.

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, the

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should be promoted as it positively affects the results in the fields of sports and science, but it should be moderated.

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,

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is becoming more important in everyday life.

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, throughout various activities, kids are being slowly introduced and encouraged to co-operate with each other.

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leads to a sense of belonging in a community and making friends, a skill that will make them happier and more useful adults.

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,

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should be encouraged through the educational programs, but even

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by the parents threw conversation and activities. To conclude,

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concepts have their merits and

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comes in terms of creating a personality, mindset, and adulthood in general. Albeit the sense of

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has a great contribution in the field of sports, it might not have the best outcome in the everyday life where the capability of efficient

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shows in everyday situations.

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, it appears to be me that

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should be encouraged but moderated.