Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are people who argue that the present
generation
should take proactive
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in protecting the environment for the
next
generation
. In my opinion, I partially agree with
this
statement because I believe it should not be the sole responsibility of the current
generation
but rather everyone's duty to protect our planet.
Firstly
, in
the
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recent
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the population of humanity has been increasing. The current
generation
compose
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majority
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of the population,
that is
why their participation is relevant in making sure that
nature
is still intact in the future. Their cooperative action would greatly create an impact
in
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the balance of
nature
. In the present time, there has been a huge advancement
of
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technology. More importantly ,
this
technological advancement is important in taking care of
nature
.
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, a recent study conducted found out that
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operated vehicles greatly decreased the amount of CO2 emissions from cars and in
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it helps in preventing the
green house
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effect. Since
this
generation
is more tech
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, they could greatly utilize
this
in having a greener planet.
Moreover
, the government should
also
take participation because they are the
one
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in charge when it comes to making regulations. It is obvious that those who are in the position are elderly and if they will allow companies or private
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to exploit
the
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nature
,
then
the
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that are made by the youngsters are useless.
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, in the city of Naga, there
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plenty of tree planting program done by students.
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, during a
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a huge devastating landslide
occured
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due to the heavy exploitation of the cement companies that are present in the area. To conclude, the entire population
in
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the planet is vastly composed of young people, and if they will
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hand in hand they could bring a huge impact.
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, there
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technological
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advancement that they can use in preserving
nature
. More
imporatantly
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importantly

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, they should not
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the sole responsibility, and that the government should
also
aide them in their struggle in
preseving
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preserving

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the
nature
for
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the
next
generation
.

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