Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are people who argue that the present

generation

should take proactive

meassures

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measures

in protecting the environment for the

next

generation

. In my opinion, I partially agree with

this

statement because I believe it should not be the sole responsibility of the current

generation

but rather everyone's duty to protect our planet.

Firstly

, in

the

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recent

decades

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the population of humanity has been increasing. The current

generation

compose

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majority

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the majority

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of the population,

that is

why their participation is relevant in making sure that

nature

is still intact in the future. Their cooperative action would greatly create an impact

in

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the balance of

nature

. In the present time, there has been a huge advancement

of

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technology. More importantly ,

this

technological advancement is important in taking care of

nature

.

For example

, a recent study conducted found out that

electric

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operated vehicles greatly decreased the amount of CO2 emissions from cars and in

return

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it helps in preventing the

green house

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effect. Since

this

generation

is more tech

savy

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savvy

, they could greatly utilize

this

in having a greener planet.

Moreover

, the government should

also

take participation because they are the

one

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in charge when it comes to making regulations. It is obvious that those who are in the position are elderly and if they will allow companies or private

enetities

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entities

to exploit

the

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nature

,

then

the

sacrificies

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sacrifices

that are made by the youngsters are useless.

For instance

, in the city of Naga, there

are

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plenty of tree planting program done by students.

However

, during a

typhoon

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a huge devastating landslide

occured

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occurred

due to the heavy exploitation of the cement companies that are present in the area. To conclude, the entire population

in

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the planet is vastly composed of young people, and if they will

work

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hand in hand they could bring a huge impact.

Aditionally

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Additionally

, there

are

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technological

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advancement that they can use in preserving

nature

. More

imporatantly

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importantly

, they should not

given

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the sole responsibility, and that the government should

also

aide them in their struggle in

preseving

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preserving

the

nature

for

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the

next

generation

.