In many parts of the world today, there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people skin. Outline the reason for using such products, and discuss what effect they have in term of health and Society?

The curiosity of lightning or whitening the
skin
is mainly amongst the Asian
people
, and they spent a lot on
such
products
which help to change the
skin
tone.
This
essay will examine the reasons, why
people
use these
products
,
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and would discuss the effects
this
has on
people
health and Society. The
first
and the foremost reason, using
such
products
people
desire more whiten
skin
rather than darkens. To understand
this
, we have to look back at the history of the Asian civilization in which higher status tended to stay indoors whilst
people
of low status worked outside, usually farming. As a
,
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result those
people
who were indoor has much lighter
skin
than dark-
skin
, and to break
this
belief system
people
use beauty
products
so that they had look similar.
However
, despite it has numerous benefits, but it has some detrimental effects
also
, with the higher use of
this
artificial material they directly come in contact with steroids which causes serious problems,
such
as
skin
cancer, swelling, speckled
skin
.
Moreover
, some take sittings for plastic surgeries, which tighten and brighten the
skin
for a particular time, and long time consequences are very harsh.
For example
, most film industry stars are using the artificial method to look stunning, and later ,on they face serious health issues, as well as looking old age earlier than in-common.
Thus
, it has long-term side effects than short-term resolutions.
Furthermore
, it develops discrimination between the
people
who looks dark, and the feeling of inferiority complex has been coming mind, in spite of
this
, it leads to the mindset of the
people
that whiten always looks better than others. Whereas, it is not true as it depends on the features of the person.
Hence
, it has a greater impact on the social life of individuals with a dark tone. In Conclusion, the
products
only enriching the business of Manufacturers, and users of
such
products
only getting temporary benefits, with putting their life at risk by opening several ways to serious health issues, and
also
delivering the wrong message to society that colour matters more than the character and natural colour gifted by nature.
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