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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People believe that
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international
news
 should be involved as a
school
subject
, while others think that it may affect other valuable
school
 time. It is a tendency to believe that many schools provide an effective course
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 their children, particularly in academic subjects.
However
,
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global information should be concerned by teachers to enhance the children perspective as well. According to
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 point of view, providing international
news
 as the
subject
 in schools can provide many benefits to
students
.
For example
, widely their perspective of variant cultures around the world, gain more knowledge about economic and
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 development and keep them up to date on the current situation.
On the other hand
,
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international
news
 might be too complicated for young children to understand. It would be better to encourage
then
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 story rather than
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 story. Some people believe that
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international
news
 as
a
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 main
subject
 in
school
 might waste the other valuable
subject
 because it is not relative in the career path.
For instance
, most
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professional
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 careers are required skills for academic knowledge.
This
 is why the
students
 should spend more time on it rather than the global
news
. In conclusion, there are several benefits and drawbacks to
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international
news
 as a
subject
 in
school
. In my opinion, I believe that
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global information should be provided to
students
. It can be considered as
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additional subjects rather than the main one.
Moreover
, it should be considered the age of
students
 to study
this
subject
 as well. The high
school
students
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. They will gain more critical thinking about
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society living
also
 wider their perspective in life.
This
 will
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 them ready to challenge their future lives.
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