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Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students will no longer exist the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree.

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In the modern world, the tendency to replace the traditional
system
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 of education, which involves both pedagogues and pupils has seen a long-term gradual increase. There is an opinion that it will completely disappear in several decades. I totally agree with
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 with, one predominant nuance, which should be taken into consideration when it comes to the learning approach, is the pressing impact of new technologies on
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. To put it differently, there is a multitude of gadgets and devices, which are widely used for the educational process, so they will potentially replace real teachers in the classroom, and it excludes the major element of the traditional
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 as the constant contact between schoolchildren and tutors. As a case in point, in Russia, a variety of schools have started applying computer programmes to explain mathematical algorithms or geographical events, and their interactive approach is extremely attractive for students.
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, the involvement of teachers in the learning process has been decreased.
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, the rapid development and popularity of self-education platforms
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 to the altering of the conventional learning
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.
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, a growing number of online
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 in almost all domains have recently appeared, and after completing these programmes students obtain a real diploma, which can be used for a job application. To illustrate
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 well-known website Coursera is one of the most popular platforms for online studying nowadays, which provides a multitude of courses for different topics, and it is already used by a tremendous number of subscribers.
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 my opinion, the same approach of learning will become even more attractive in the future, so it will probably shift people's attitude towards new studying methods. In conclusion, the altering of
traditional
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 educational
system
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 is all too familiar nowadays. Some people argue that in a couple of decades the role of learners and tutors will be modified, and I completely agree with
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. As the possessing impact of new technologies has
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place
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 in the learning process, I think online education with gadgets
instead
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 of teachers will replace the conventional methods.

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