In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

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like doctors,engineers leave

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which are paying less salary and they move to foreign nations for better pay.

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about major problems which forced them to make these decision and the solution to resolve these issue. Well trained professional leave

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mainly because of there less pay which they obtaining from there respective companies.They

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about the rules laid by the government.These sort of issue are caused mainly because of the pay given by there companies.on highly trained

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leaving these country affects the government in

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to depend upon other countries in order to lead their life. The possible solutions to retain skilled professional is that on providing them

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better pay and increasing there annual bonus.There is a chance

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provide lots of infrastructure to these individuals.on retaining these our motherland can see a significant increase in there GDP.

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significant growth.on practising these methods future generation can get inspired by these and they

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opt to stay in the country. These

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have a valid point on leaving

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own land for a better life which

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provided in developed nations.So if we give credit to there skills there is a high possibility

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and they will happily stay in these native and they will surely contribute a lot to there society.

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? Do you think this will be the case in the future?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure?