Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
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this
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we all Add a comma
,era
use
social media to get updated with the world . so every things
have pros and cons so Change to a singular noun
thing
its
depend on us how we Change the pronoun
they
it
use
the
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apply
things
things
in a good manner or in a bad manner . so Remove the redundancy
apply
toady
here Correct your spelling
today
i
am discussing Change the capitalization
I
about
both advantages and disadvantages of Remove the preposition
apply
advertisement
in this
world.
firstly
i
talk about t the advantages so when we see the Change the capitalization
I
advertisement
this
helps us to know about things
and helps us how to use
this
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this thing
these things
things
and how its
work so Correct pronoun usage
they
this
is helpful
way to learn Add an article
a helpful
abut
new products. Correct your spelling
about
For
example
we see the Add a comma
,example
advertisement
of
any washing machine they show us that machine is good for that loads we Change preposition
for
use
that much detergent to wash that type of clothes also
show
the time period like 60 minutes . so from Change the verb form
shows
this
we make guess that its good for us like a small family and they buy that machine rather Add a comma
,this
then
get Replace the word
than
wrong
one.
so we all know that there Change the article
the wrong
is
some disadvantages of Change the verb form
are
advertisement
like when there is any new phones come
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that come
in
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into
a
market they show Correct article usage
the
price
if phones quality and youngsters try to get new phones . they bother there mom dad to get Correct article usage
the price
new
phone some of the middle family Correct article usage
a new
dont
have that much money to buy expensive Correct your spelling
don't
things
and they take some wrong steps to get that . they also
go away from there studies and also
effect there eyesight bu using phone whole
day .
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the whole
at
Add the comma(s)
, at last,
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i
just wanna say that always tries Change the capitalization
I
a
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apply
postive
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positive
things
which is helpful for us . And make our life easier and always get Add an article
an update
update
with new Correct your spelling
updated
tecknowledgy
.Correct your spelling
acknowledge
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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