Many university degree holders cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it ?

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numerous

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college level

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holders

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are in a difficult state

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looking for an occupation in their chosen career.To my way of thinking,there

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two major

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which

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communicating skill and the standard background of

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have linked to the problems.So the purpose of

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essay is to prove my statement is indeed reasonable.

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with,

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university authorization is notably indispensable for job applicants in society nowadays.

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,interviewers are presumably to judge one's potential on their quality of study record.

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,not every interviewee can demand

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condition because of a

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rivalry in term of achievement in academic.

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,smart competitors are the front-runners and the rests are left behind.In order to overcome

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situation,countless youngster

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been working on their pedagogical in a persistence procedure to get

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.

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,in the

abscence

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absence

of university verification,people will hardly find any careers as they desire to be

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an adequate background claiming is certainly affecting their future.

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,adolescence have a good sense

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communicating are preferable in

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situation

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the feeling of impressed to the examiner by starting a satisfactory conversation.On that account,

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dominant ability is remarkably vital for surviving in

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generation.

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,juveniles who lack

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talent seem to be a

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for them because they barely deliver

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point of view to the questioner and even cause a

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in their

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transmission

.

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,

interviewee

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who has a large

influencence

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influence

on their response will gain several positive feedbacks from the auditors and somehow one can pass the low expectation from others because of a low academic record. To conclude,we can see that the communicating skill and the standard of pedagogical qualification have played an important role

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the account of judgement.

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a person who has acceptable results from their background yet does not have the ability to talk thoroughly will

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get a chance to fail because they miss one of the element

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.Above that,we can a

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image of the tension of the

competion

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competition

at the moment.