It is a tendency to believe that
is the major
that lead to deterioration in the
. Generally, I reckon that globalization could make people travel across the globe easier, and
reason may drive the
in the public to become worse.
According to the recent
, the transportations are now developed due to advanced technologies including convenient trains or aeroplanes for people to travel to their destination in a short period.
, people usually choose to fly across the continents rather than in the past because there are many more low-cost flights available in the present time. The more
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crowded travellers visit tourist attractions, the more the amount of waste may increase. Most of the tourist destinations are natures
as oceans or mountains. It cannot deny the fact that various popular oceans and mountains around the
are full of plastics which can harm both marine creatures and wildlife. They have suffered from these
over the decades since
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, there are several solutions to fix these
, the tourists have to raise awareness of environmental issues because 90 per cent of these
are induced by humans.
, tourists need to reduce the use of waste especially plastics and get rid of them from the
, they can not throw these trashes on the ground or in the sea.
, the government should take an action on stricter rules in
industries by fining those tourists who destroy the
and should promote
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legal environmental protection in every destination around the
In conclusion, the environmental issues caused by
should be concerned in effective ways. I strongly believe that human should live with kindness to our planet, animals and plants in order to sustain our planet to live longer in the future.