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Some people believe that travelling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that is better to travel with other people you know. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are those who have the belief that when getting to know a place or a culture, the best manner is doing it alone, while others think that
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 accompanied is better.
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 essay discusses both points of view and
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 I will give my own opinion which is that the best trip experiences are when
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 others along to share their moments. There are several reasons why is better to travel alone to experience a new country or culture.
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 of them is the freedom of choice the
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 has, not having to consider others’ will.
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 enables
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 to do everything he planned and want to,
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 they could have to discuss with their partners their opinions and preferences, and may not be able to do something desired. Another reason is the opportunity for the individual to have their own view of that experience, not being influenced by others’ perceptions.
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 could have their thoughts manipulated because of others’ thinking and not enjoy as much as possible.
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, to travel accompanied have their benefits.
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 with, it is safer. It is important to have people you trust and you can count on, especially when visiting an unknown location. It is not unusual to have some minor accident while
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 and is enormously handful to have someone familiar around to get help.
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 of the most pleasing ways to fully enjoy a trip is having others to share their discoveries and unique moments. In conclusion, both sides have their merits.
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, in my opinion, the advantages of
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 accompanied,
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 as the safety and the experience sharing, outweigh the benefits of
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 alone, like the
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 and the lack of others’
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influential
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