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Khanna, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the

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at our company’s office has started malfunctioning. As you know, our firm’s work is completely dependent on the

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as we have to deal with overseas customers through the internet. The

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that is

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currently in use is obsolete and it is not compatible with the latest graphics or software programmes.

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, a few keys of the keyboard have stopped functioning.

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, the CD drive is not working. Due to these problems, office work has

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herculean task. In view of the above, I suggest it would be a good idea if you could buy a new

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. I am concerned that if a new

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cannot be brought within a few days our organization may bear a heavy loss. Please try to look into

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matter as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and support. Yours sincerely, XYZ

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get the news. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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write a letter to your neighbour You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbour to look after you house. Why you want to go away What you want your neighbour to look after If there are any problems then give instructions

what are the advantages and disadvantages of using cameras to fight crime?

You have received a bill from a mobile phone (or cell phone) company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international calls. Write a letter to the company, complaining about this giving your reasons asking for the bill to be changed