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Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

#people #countries #food #population #import
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Food
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 has always been a very important topic
world wide
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. Some
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contries
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countries
 produce a lot
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 and have enough
food
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 production, but others have
lack
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of
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food
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 for their population. The
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circumstances
 varies
on
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 each
contry
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country
 of the world. Location and climate,
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example
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 are a very important matter on the capacity of
produce
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 or not
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 type of
food
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; there are
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contries
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countries
 like Canada, Sweeden or Russia that maybe are limited in what they can cultivate in their very cold weather and
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contries
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countries
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 as Japan or Mexico in a more hot climate that maybe alouds more agricultural life.
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 the other
hand
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 we can not speak about "
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" without taking into consideration the economy
on
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of
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 each
contry
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country
. Some have the power and
indumentary
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rudimentary
necesary
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necessary
 to
procude
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produce
 their
food
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 and even more, like the United States, Italy, France or Germany, just to mention a few; but others
doesn'
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t
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coun'
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count
can't
couldn't
t
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 even with the basic need to
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fulfil
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 request,
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 as many
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contries
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countries
 in
africa
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Africa
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 or India, to mention a few. I can'
t
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 agree
on
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 any of the statements, because of what I expose before I
belive
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believe
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 that even when each
contry
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country
 produce what they need, there will always be some that
doesn'
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t
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 have any or enough and
needs
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 to import from abroad.
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