4. Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
As the world became a global village, most
countries
are open for immigration, study & work opportunities leading to a surge in moving abroad. People started to study & live in foreign countries
due to its lucrative benefits
especially
for studies. Having said that it has both advantages and disadvantages. Add the comma(s)
,especially
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essay will discuss about
it.
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First
of all, living or studying abroad help to reap the benefit of intercultural exposure with other nationalities and improve one’s personality with a wider knowledge horizon. For example
, a person will become bilingual by learning a new language, earn a new skill through part-time jobs, more adaptable to different circumstances, independent and confident. Secondly
, when one takes education or job abroad their social networking skills improve as they interact with internationalities
which help them to land Correct your spelling
internationality
in
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apply
a better job prospects
through referrals. Correct the article-noun agreement
better job prospects
a better job prospect
Thirdly
some countries
offer best
educational system and it opens a path for permanent resident visa status to gain Correct article usage
the best
better
quality of life and other facilities like free medical care, Add an article
a better
no cost
schooling for kids. Add a hyphen
no-cost
Last
but not least working abroad will help to gain and save paramount money due to the currency conversion differences which improves one’s financial status in their
home country.
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one
However
; while the advantages are so tempting, disadvantages are also
there while moving abroad. Firstly
a person’s inexperience in a new place would make them a victim of fraudulent activities. Secondly
staying away from family would lead to homesickness and to an extent depression especially if they are staying in cold countries
. Thirdly
, when studying & living abroad brings in many benefits
, it is also
expensive for people from moderate
economic background. Add an article
the moderate
For example
, migrating for studies can result in debt if they are not financially sound and they will not get the benefits
of a citizen while they are on temporary
visa like free medical care. Add an article
a temporary
Finally
, from the aspect of earning versus spending, when a person become
a permanent resident or citizen in another country, their own homeland economy will not be benefitted in terms of gross domestic profit.
To conclude, migrating to live or study abroad gives both Change the verb form
becomes
benefits
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