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Research into medical treatments are essential to improve health and fight disease. Who do you think should fund this research: individuals, private companies or governments?

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Every individual or well-known health is wealth, but without funding which cannot be possible to provide better treatment for four people .Gift hunting for search or medical is the responsibility of every nation, CT James, not only by private companies and
government
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To begin
 with, the
first
 and foremost, the population of the world are increasing day by day as well as Diseases are
also
 spreading among the people in many ways
such
 as, asthma, lung cancer, breathing
problems
 and many more health
problems
 these kinds of health
problems
 need
research
 how can it stopped or not being supplied around us
furthermore
,
research
 into medical treatments need much
money
 because there are many researchers doing
research
 on that which consume lots of
money
 or time and other various kinds of things Which are import from another place for doing better
research
 to find out solutions of deadly diseases ,In that ,process
money
 play
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 important role .
in addition
 to, there are many cases when experiments or failed due to lack of
money
.
Moreover
, recently the whole world is suffering from a pandemic due to deadly virus spreading all around us in that time people are stuck in their home, they are not allowed to going outside show that
,
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situation
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 makes every individual scared because during that period Majority of a nation facing medical treatment problem due to lack of ventilators
then
, majority of individuals are donated
money
 to their belongings nations which helped
government
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 to
research
 on a vaccine and provide better medical treatment to their citizens .
thus
, everyone should be given and donate
money
 to the
government
 . From my point of view, nobody knows About what happens in the future, we should ready for fighting with upcoming
problems
 .
although
, it is a prime duty of
government
 to make some better financial policy to protect their citizens from natural disaster but individuals
also
 don’t forget their own responsibility for their nation ,they should be
also
givenalso
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given also
give also
 give more tax and funding to
government
 .so ,that ,we can
live
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 save and long .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential
  • improve
  • health
  • fight disease
  • fund
  • research
  • individuals
  • private companies
  • governments
  • funding
  • investment
  • contribute
  • allocate
  • resources
  • promote
  • advancements
  • discoveries
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • improve quality of life
  • develop new treatments
  • medical innovations
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