It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the globalization era, the progression of
technology
has become a necessary part of daily life. Opinions are divided as to whether many technological devices and advance processes have negative effects on several original
cultures
in various countries. Personally, I believe that
people
in
this
decade can combine
technology
advance and local
culture
in a modern way. In the present day, traditional
cultures
can spread by using technological advances.
For example
, one of the influential browsers is Youtube that millions of
people
on the earth can access. Many social influencers or superstars, including actors, singers and reporters, create their channels to share local
culture
stories when they travel around nature
such
as street food festivals in Thailand, the Songkran festival and the Loy kra thong festival.
On the contrary
, some
people
argue that experiencing a local
culture
directly is more impressive than seeing it on Youtube.
This
might be true to a certain extent but I strongly believe that conserving
culture
in online society is better than letting it disappear from both the actual place and social community.
Although
the number of excellent technologies is produced for the world moving toward, several traditional
cultures
are preserved until
this
day. To highlight my point, the famous
technology
company in the US that spread brunch in various nations known as ‘Apple’ established by Steve Jobs.
This
organization has initiated many devices since 1976
such
as the Apple desktop computer, iPhone and iPad;
however
, the famous festival in Thailand remained.
Moreover
, numerous Thai festivals are known throughout the world because tourists can use
this
technology
to share tourist attractions in my country with global residents. In conclusion, national
cultures
can be popularized by
technology
progressions;
moreover
, unique
cultures
in each country are preserved and foreigners can know it. I recommended
people
around the world should use smart
technology
to spread
culture
in their country.
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