Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The process of learning requires helping

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to understand what is right and wrong in early childhood. Some people say that punishing

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is mandatory in order to lead them learning

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difference.

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essay will explain why I partially agree with the necessity of punishing

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and will,

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, give examples of

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that should be allowed regarding teaching good manners.

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with,

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can be strongly affected by their treatment during

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childhood. Traumas and fears can lead young people to develop depression and problems regarding their self-esteem.

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, the process of learning, most of the times, should rely on orientation, conversations and guidance,

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of prioritizing

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.

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, there are some

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that

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to be more

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them their peers, and, in those cases, some kids of punishments should apply. To illustrate that situation, a child who is constantly bullying his/her colleagues and does not change their behaviour with adults conversations should be punished at some level.

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, in some situations,

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would be

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, not all kinds of punishments

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to be plausible in the teaching

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process.

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, punishments that might harm

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physically or mentally should definitely be avoided to protect their integrity as human beings.

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, parents and teachers should choose to punish

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denying them to use or do something that might be

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pleasant

for them or even restricting its usage.

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, when my niece, who is eight, do not behave herself

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to her mother principles, my sister

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the usage of the internet. It is an efficient manner to make my niece understand that some behaviour was wrong without damaging her mental well being. To conclude, I partially agree with the necessity of punishing people.

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should be

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only in specific situations and never would physically or mentally harm a child.

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, parents and teachers should prefer punishing

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and

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using restricting actions

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of other vias.