Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The process of learning requires helping

children

to understand what is right and wrong in early childhood. Some people say that punishing

children

is mandatory in order to lead them learning

this

difference.

This

essay will explain why I partially agree with the necessity of punishing

youngsters

and will,

further

, give examples of

punishment

that should be allowed regarding teaching good manners.

To begin

with,

children

can be strongly affected by their treatment during

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childhood. Traumas and fears can lead young people to develop depression and problems regarding their self-esteem.

Therefore

, the process of learning, most of the times, should rely on orientation, conversations and guidance,

instead

of prioritizing

punishment

.

Nevertheless

, there are some

youngsters

that

seems

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to be more

close minded

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them their peers, and, in those cases, some kids of punishments should apply. To illustrate that situation, a child who is constantly bullying his/her colleagues and does not change their behaviour with adults conversations should be punished at some level.

Moreover

,

although

, in some situations,

punishment

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would be

recomended

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recommended

, not all kinds of punishments

seems

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to be plausible in the teaching

children

process.

For instance

, punishments that might harm

youngsters

physically or mentally should definitely be avoided to protect their integrity as human beings.

Thus

, parents and teachers should choose to punish

children

denying them to use or do something that might be

pleasent

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pleasant

for them or even restricting its usage.

For instance

, when my niece, who is eight, do not behave herself

accordingly

to her mother principles, my sister

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the usage of the internet. It is an efficient manner to make my niece understand that some behaviour was wrong without damaging her mental well being. To conclude, I partially agree with the necessity of punishing people.

Punishment

should be

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applied

only in specific situations and never would physically or mentally harm a child.

Moreover

, parents and teachers should prefer punishing

youngsters

and

children

using restricting actions

instead

of other vias.