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Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Artificial Intelligence has made huge strides forward in terms of automating numerous task in
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 century.
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 of the products of
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technology
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 is a voice translator from
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 language to another, which is generally embedded in mobile phones and computers. Even though it is quite helpful on many occasions, I believe that it might not vanish the dependency of human
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 in future because of many reasons which are put forth in subsequent paragraphs.
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 with, the prominent reason in
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 context is that
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technology
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 is futile in converting emotions of the speech or text. It is generally seen that a human translator often intimate emotions
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 as happiness, sadness, astonishment and so on while interpreting language.
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,
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 aspect is devoid in
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 emerging
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 of translation, owing to which it is unlikely that human
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 can be fully replaced in future.
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, many audiobooks, which are being converted in many languages from the original
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, are so mundane that readers often resort to
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 them because of lacking emotions.
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, automatic
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 lack the ability to convert some metaphorically spoken words from
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 language to another. It is primarily due to the fact that the computer is still way far behind in understanding the context of the situation.
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,
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 is not the case with human
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 who are expert in every angle in which words are spoken and written.
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 situation clearly depicts the role of the human translator, which seems impossible to intimate by the machines. To conclude,
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 automatic systems are quite handy in converting small texts, yet I assert that
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technology
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 cannot replicate the human
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 in terms of emotional intelligence as well as understanding the exact context of the spoken and written words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automatic language translation
  • human translators
  • interpreters
  • cultural context
  • nuanced
  • linguistic subtleties
  • misunderstandings
  • real-time adaptation
  • over-dependence
  • language learning
  • precision
  • confidentiality
  • professional fields
  • legal translation
  • medical translation
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