Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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always received

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from rich

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approach unable to address the

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issue so according to some, developed

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ought to provide different type of aid rather than financial support. In my opinion, I agree that rich

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supposed to not give financial assistance to poor

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as there are many types of support available to help assist them. A good reason for rich

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to deny provide financial assistant to

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countries

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is that it help them to acquire immediate basic need

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as food and drink. These needs are the crucial items to be considered by rich

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to supplied

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rather than

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.

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, preventing citizen in

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countries

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to become starvation.

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that, fewer income

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should

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receive medical treatment from

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that are not categorized as poor. Free treatment is very crucial especially help patients with chronic diseases to obtain the proper treatments and medicines. By doing

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method the patient's life is expected back to normal and can help

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generate income by doing business

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. Aside from that, helping poor

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with education by building and repairing schools

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is an important contribution that can be made. Students will able to learn in comfortable condition and help them to learn easily. Another point to consider is that, give

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to fewer income

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lead to other problem as they probably have constrained to think and spent the

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for what purposes.

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, the possibility of the allocation being misused is higher due to incapability in managing a fund. The

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are likely to have

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educated people,which make them facing complexities to manage their country in a proper way.

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providing none financial assistance is the best approach to be executed. Apart from that, the rich

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can help to build houses and business building. Both developments are considered important to restart and growth

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their economy which

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allows them in future not to rely on other

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.

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, having a proper business place encourage customers to come over more than once and allow them to shop easily. To conclude,

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supposed not to acquire financial support from rich

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due to the many types of assistance available to help them and teaching them to be more educated is very important to help their country not to become poor.