Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poor
countries
always received Use synonyms
money
from rich Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
Add a comma
,however
this
approach unable to address Linking Words
Use synonyms
poverty
issue so according to some developed Correct article usage
the poverty
countries
ought to Use synonyms
be provide
different type of aid rather than financial support. In my opinion, I agree that rich Change the verb form
provide
countries
supposed to not give financial assistance to poor Use synonyms
countries
as there are many types of support available to help assist them.
A good reason for rich Use synonyms
countries
to deny provide financial assistant to Use synonyms
poverty
Use synonyms
countries
is that it help them to acquire immediate basic need Use synonyms
such
as food and drink. These needs are the crucial items to be considered by rich Linking Words
countries
to supplied Use synonyms
first
rather than Linking Words
money
. Use synonyms
As a result
, preventing citizen in Linking Words
poverty
Use synonyms
countries
to become starvation. Use synonyms
Besides
that, the Linking Words
less
income Change the quantifier
fewer
countries
should Use synonyms
also
receive medical treatment from Linking Words
countries
that are not categorized as poor. Use synonyms
The free
treatment is very crucial especially help patients with chronic diseases to obtain the proper treatments and medicines. By doing Correct article usage
Free
this
method the patients’ life is expected back to normal and can help Linking Words
countries
generate income by doing business Use synonyms
for example
. Aside from that, helping poor Linking Words
countries
with Use synonyms
an
education by building and repairing schools Remove the article
apply
also
is Linking Words
the
important contribution Correct article usage
an
can
be made. Students will be able to learn in comfortable condition and help them to learn easily.
Another point to consider is that give Correct pronoun usage
that can
money
to Use synonyms
less
income Change the quantifier
fewer
countries
lead to other problem as they probably have constrained to think and spent the Use synonyms
money
for what purposes. Use synonyms
For example
, the possibility of the allocation Linking Words
from
being misused is higher due to incapability in managing Change preposition
apply
fund
. The Add an article
the fund
a fund
poverty
Use synonyms
countries
are likely having Use synonyms
minimal
educated people, which make them facing Change the adjective
minimally
complexity
to manage their country in Correct article usage
the complexity
proper
way. Add an article
a proper
the proper
Hence
providing none financial assistance is the best approach to be executed. Apart Linking Words
form
that, the rich Correct your spelling
from
countries
can help to build houses and business building. Both developments are considered important to restart and growth Use synonyms
up
their economy which Add the preposition
toup
then
Linking Words
allow
them in future not to rely on other Change the verb form
allows
countries
. Use synonyms
For instance
, having a proper business place encourage customers to come over more than once and allow them to shop easily.
To conclude, Linking Words
poverty
Use synonyms
countries
supposed not to acquire financial support from rich Use synonyms
countries
due to Use synonyms
many
types of assistance available to help them and teaching them to be more educated is very important to help their country not to become poor.Correct article usage
the many
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