Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Poor

countries

always received

money

from rich

countries

,

however

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this

approach unable to address

poverty

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issue so according to some developed

countries

ought to

be provide

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different type of aid rather than financial support. In my opinion, I agree that rich

countries

supposed to not give financial assistance to poor

countries

as there are many types of support available to help assist them. A good reason for rich

countries

to deny provide financial assistant to

poverty

countries

is that it help them to acquire immediate basic need

such

as food and drink. These needs are the crucial items to be considered by rich

countries

to supplied

first

rather than

money

.

As a result

, preventing citizen in

poverty

countries

to become starvation.

Besides

that, the

less

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income

countries

should

also

receive medical treatment from

countries

that are not categorized as poor.

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treatment is very crucial especially help patients with chronic diseases to obtain the proper treatments and medicines. By doing

this

method the patients’ life is expected back to normal and can help

countries

generate income by doing business

for example

. Aside from that, helping poor

countries

with

an

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education by building and repairing schools

also

is

the

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important contribution

can

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that can

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be made. Students will be able to learn in comfortable condition and help them to learn easily. Another point to consider is that give

money

to

less

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income

countries

lead to other problem as they probably have constrained to think and spent the

money

for what purposes.

For example

, the possibility of the allocation

from

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being misused is higher due to incapability in managing

fund

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. The

poverty

countries

are likely having

minimal

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educated people, which make them facing

complexity

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to manage their country in

proper

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a proper

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way.

Hence

providing none financial assistance is the best approach to be executed. Apart

form

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that, the rich

countries

can help to build houses and business building. Both developments are considered important to restart and growth

up

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their economy which

then

allow

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them in future not to rely on other

countries

.

For instance

, having a proper business place encourage customers to come over more than once and allow them to shop easily. To conclude,

poverty

countries

supposed not to acquire financial support from rich

countries

due to

many

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types of assistance available to help them and teaching them to be more educated is very important to help their country not to become poor.