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Dear Sir/Madam, Currently, I am working as a postdoctoral fellow from September 2018 and I have a total of more than 7 years

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experience in both academics and industry. I am considering myself under the Research Associate demand list because there is no clear cut guideline about these two positions. I worked as a postdoctoral researcher at the National Taiwan University in the year 2017-2018. I

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worked as a Scientist-IPR (Intellectual Property Rights-Patent drafting) at Arch pharma labs

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, Mumbai, India from January 2012 to March 2013

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fellow at Taipei Medical University from April 2013 to Oct 2016 and as a researcher at Formosa Pharmaceutical Inc. from November 2016 to February 2017. I have completed the bachelor (B. Pharm.), master (M. Pharm.) and PhD degrees in Pharmaceutical Sciences. I pursued my PhD from Punjab Technical University, Jalandhar’s Pharmaceutical Science PhD program, where I did my thesis work in synthetic and natural product

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in collaboration with the Indian Institute of Integrative Medicine (CSIR-lab) under the supervision of Prof. K. L. Dhar and co-supervision of

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S. Koul. During the course of my graduate ,studies I have synthesized a number of biologically active compounds. I

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isolated a number of compounds from fruit extracts of Piper attenuatum, using repeated column chromatography and HPLC. I published these data in medicinal

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letters, and natural product journal. During my postdoc, in Prof. Liou’s lab, I had furnished total synthesis of Denbinobin, and

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and Oxyresveratrol-2-O-β-D-Glucopyranoside, synthesis of Denbinobin was achieved using the FeCl3-mediated cyclization of stilbene to provide the corresponding phenanthrene. THSG and Oxyresveratrol-2-O-β-D-Glucopyranoside were synthesized by ten and four steps methodology, respectively using Baeyer-Villiger oxidation, modified Duff formylation, glycosylation and Wittig olefination reaction conditions. I was fortunate enough to publish these total syntheses in the Journal of Natural Products. I

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synthesized 2-Aroylquinoline-5,8-diones as potent anticancer agents displaying tubulin and heat shock protein 90 (HSP90) inhibition

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and published these results in Organic & Biomolecular

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. I have synthesized MT-4 for biological testing, which suppresses resistant ovarian cancer growth through targeting tubulin and HSP27, published in PLOS One.

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a quick learner and ready to adapt to new challenges and situations.

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays people like to use new electronic equipment. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those time than they are now. What problems will this cause ? What can be done to solve these problems ?

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