Some government say how many children family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary & right for a government to control the population in this way. Agree or disagree. Give reasons.
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control
the population in order to provide better living conditions for people
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such
beliefs people
tend to have babies unless they have a male child
. For instance
, in countries like India, almost every family has a male child
which might be born after two or three female children
. Likewise
, it also
depends upon the family income. Thought a family might already have two children
, they think they earn enough and wish for another child
. For example
, studies show that most people
with a handsome salary have three children
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issue
that needs government interference. There must be rules to control
how many children
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policies
such
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issue
of global concern and countries must formulate rules to control
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