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Some government say how many children family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary & right for a government to control the population in this way. Agree or disagree. Give reasons.

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Over population
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Overpopulation
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 is a big reason
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world wide
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worldwide
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 and has become a
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challenging
issue
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 that needs to be addressed immediately. Different countries have their own ways of dealing with
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issue
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 some have imposed
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strict
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policies
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 while
other
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others
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 are still planning their approach. I totally agree that there must be rules to
control
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 the population in order to provide better living conditions for
people
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. To embark upon, imposing
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strict
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 to
control
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 the number of
children
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 one has might
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 as an
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attack
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 on independent choices by some
people
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.
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, there are multifarious reasons
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this
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 amongst which cultural influence and income
plays
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 a vital role.
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Further more
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, there various cultural beliefs
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 as having a boy
child
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 is
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a must
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must
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just
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 because of
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people
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 tend to have babies unless they have a male
child
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.
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, in countries like India, almost every family has a male
child
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 which might be born after two or three female
children
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.
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, it
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 depends upon the family income. Thought a family might already have two
children
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, they think they earn enough and wish for another
child
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.
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, studies show that most
people
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 with a handsome salary have three
children
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.
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,
people
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 might not like the
govement
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government
 to make
policies
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which
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 influence their independent choices.
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,
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 is becoming a vital
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 that needs government interference. There must be rules to
control
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 how many
children
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 one should have because there are
people
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 having six
children
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 or even more who are in
greed
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 of having a boy
child
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 is not only contributing to
population
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the population
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 but
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 influencing the health of the mother. To illustrate,
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research conducted by the times on the health of
mother
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the mother
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 in Africa shows that most
wome
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women
 with poor health have given birth to multiple babies.
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, there must be various
controling
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controlling
policies
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such
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 a more the number of
children
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 higher the tax and much more. In conclusion, there is an ongoing
debate
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aboutdebate
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 whether imposing
policies
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 is right or wrong.
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illucidated
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elucidated
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cons
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 of the idea. In my
opinon
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opinion
, It has now become an
issue
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 of global concern and countries must formulate rules to
control
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 the number of offsprings one can have.
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