The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity ?

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with,
throughtout
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throughout
the world there is
rise
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in poverty, food shortage and loss of employment due to
ever increasing
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of
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population.
Thus
, I completely agree with the above statement and
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, my essay will
talk
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the various
problem
that mankind is facing and
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, the causes which
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inflicted
this
huge
problem
. Currently in the modern world, one of the biggest
problem
humanity is facing is
of
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food shortage and
this
is because there are more
people
than the land available. More and more farming lands are being converted
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buildings and structures to create
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for the
people
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Other important problems like poverty and loss of employment go hand in hand where for one empty position
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are more than 1000 applicants
moreover
, nowadays companies are hiring young
people
who can work harder and faster than old experience person and guess what they come at
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cheap price to the institution.
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, In Mumbai when
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Reliance listed the job opening for the position of Director on Linked in, it was seen that more than 25000 candidates applied for it.
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, two major
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that has contributed most in the increase of the citizens are the lack of education and Climate change. There is
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seen in
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of floods and massive rainfall which has directly affected
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the
people
leaving in the rural areas where they depend upon agriculture production for their lively hood and when
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of
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theirs get affected they migrate to cities looking for work.
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of individuals in
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dont
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don't
get proper schooling and are deprived of family planning
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knowledge
.
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,
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family of
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country side
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human would consist of 5 to 6
people
where he can barely meet the ends. To conclude,
rising
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public is
major
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threat faced by
the
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every nation in
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and which has resulted in numerous other problems and
hence
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completely agree with the above statement.
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