The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity ?
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throughtout
the world there is Correct your spelling
throughout
rise
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a rise
the rise
ever increasing
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ever-increasing
of
population. Change preposition
apply
Thus
, I completely agree with the above statement and Linking Words
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, my essay will Linking Words
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the various Verify preposition usage
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problem
that mankind is facing and Use synonyms
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, the causes which Linking Words
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have
this
huge Linking Words
problem
.
Currently in the modern world, one of the biggest Use synonyms
problem
humanity is facing is Use synonyms
of
food shortage and Change preposition
apply
this
is because there are more Linking Words
people
than the land available. More and more farming lands are being converted Use synonyms
in
buildings and structures to create Change preposition
into
habitat
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people
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.
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in.
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there
moreover
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very
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a very
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On the contrary
, two major Linking Words
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problem
that has contributed most in the increase of the citizens are the lack of education and Climate change. There is Change to a plural noun
problems
increase
seen in Correct article usage
an increase
number
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a number
the number
to
the Change preposition
apply
people
leaving in the rural areas where they depend upon agriculture production for their lively hood and when Use synonyms
employment
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the employment
of
theirs get affected they migrate to cities looking for work. Change preposition
apply
Other
thing is Change the wording
Another
lot
of individuals in Change the article
a lot
village
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the village
a village
dont
get proper schooling and are deprived of family planning Correct your spelling
don't
knowldege
. Correct your spelling
knowledge
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Nuclear
family of Correct article usage
the Nuclear
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a country
country side
human would consist of 5 to 6 Correct your spelling
countryside
people
where he can barely meet the ends.
To conclude, Use synonyms
rising
public is Add an article
the rising
major
threat faced by Add an article
a major
the
every nation in Remove the article
apply
globe
and which has resulted in numerous other problems and Add an article
the globe
hence
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completely agree with the above statement.Change the capitalization
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