In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays a lot of people prefer to wear more suitable
clothes
, for
example
jeans and t-shirts, rather than their national clothing. Add the comma(s)
,example
Society
arguesAdd an article
The society
,
whether it has more pros or, Remove the comma
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in contrast
, more cons. From my point of view, it is a positive development. It can be proved by the comfort level of western clothes
.
For instance
, this
type of clothing is usually made from suitable materials, such
as jeans, cotton, etc. In this
case, western outfits are very comfortable for work and relaxation. For example
, you can go for a walk to
the park, or simply go shopping, and you would not feel Change preposition
in
yourself
uncomfortable. Even cowboys wear jeans, so it is suitable even for horse-riding. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Therefore
, the reasons for choosing western costumes are obvious.
Another advantage of this
type of clothing is that it helps to show your personality. While traditional clothes
are usually made by one example and make people to
be similar, western outfits provide a large Change the verb form
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amount
of different prints and illustrations. Change the quantifier
number
On the other hand
, this
tendency leads to the extinction of traditional clothes
. But, if there is a choice between comfortable individuality and national traditions, each person, I guess, will chose
the Change the verb form
choose
first
variant.
To sum up, comfort and personal taste in fashion and style, which are shown in lots of magazines and fashion-weeks, win in the competition with national rituals presently. So this
tendency is absolutely has
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absolutely has
more
positive influence on the public. I hope, Add an article
a more
every one
will Replace the word
everyone
chose
themselves and they own comfort in any situation.Change the verb form
choose
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