In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays a lot of people prefer to wear more suitable
clothes
,
for
example
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jeans and t-shirts, rather than their national clothing.
Society
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argues
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whether it has more pros or,
in contrast
, more cons. From my point of view, it is a positive development. It can be proved by the comfort level of western
clothes
.
For instance
,
this
type of clothing is usually made from suitable materials,
such
as jeans, cotton, etc. In
this
case, western outfits are very comfortable for work and relaxation.
For example
, you can go for a walk
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the park, or simply go shopping, and you would not feel
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uncomfortable. Even cowboys wear jeans, so it is suitable even for horse-riding.
Therefore
, the reasons for choosing western costumes are obvious. Another advantage of
this
type of clothing is that it helps to show your personality. While traditional
clothes
are usually made by one example and make people
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be similar, western outfits provide a large
amount
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of different prints and illustrations.
On the other hand
,
this
tendency leads to the extinction of traditional
clothes
. But, if there is a choice between comfortable individuality and national traditions, each person, I guess, will
chose
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the
first
variant. To sum up, comfort and personal taste in fashion and style, which are shown in lots of magazines and fashion-weeks, win in the competition with national rituals presently. So
this
tendency
is absolutely has
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more
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positive influence on the public. I hope,
every one
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will
chose
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themselves and they own comfort in any situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Influence
  • Perception
  • Modern
  • Trendy
  • Practicality
  • Comfort
  • Professionalism
  • Integration
  • Global economy
  • Cultural identity
  • Appreciation
  • Preservation
  • Individual expression
  • Freedom of choice
  • Positive
  • Negative
  • Impacts
  • Local industries
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